Film

Gabri’s Movie Review: “GRU-PDX” An Exploration of Music in Portland, OR

  • ChristopherJHLambert

    “I actually pulled out some pen and paper half way through the film to write down the names of bands I’ve never heard of, even though I live in the city.”

    That comma isn’t right. It makes the clause “even though I live in the city” refer back to the action of pulling out pen and paper. So it make it sound like, “Even though I live in the city, I actually pulled out some pen and paper…”

    Remove the comma and you get the phrase you wanted: “to write down the names of bands I’ve never heard of even though I live in the city.”